Forum:Warrior's Code Chapter One Review

Hi, I'm new here and I wanted some assistance regarding my Fanon, Warrior's Code. Warrior's Code is a FF about a Gorasni soldier, and his exploits and adventures from E-Day and beyond. I wanted to see if anybody could revise and check it for me. Here's the Link: http://akantorking.deviantart.com/#/d4jhsnj. Just download file and read. --Dragonzzilla 00:31, December 20, 2011 (UTC)